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  1. Barbara
    Barbara April 23, 2007 at 10:31 am | | Reply

    aahh…the power of the mind…this was very good. I liked it …very different twist there…made the poem

    Barbara

  2. Barbara
    Barbara April 23, 2007 at 3:31 pm | | Reply

    aahh…the power of the mind…this was very good. I liked it …very different twist there…made the poemBarbara

  3. Bryn
    Bryn March 18, 2009 at 10:21 pm | | Reply

    Your words are always beautiful and inspiring but I don’t feel that you filtered the passion inside of you the way you could. You speak of words transcending space and time, your words powerful yet asinine ๐Ÿ˜› it feels like a contradiction. And that’s the whole point. Life is a contradiction, we are all powerful yet not at all. We are ashes and we are form. I think that you have a start and you need to dive deeper into what you are trying to convay. ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Bryn
    Bryn March 19, 2009 at 3:21 am | | Reply

    Your words are always beautiful and inspiring but I don’t feel that you filtered the passion inside of you the way you could. You speak of words transcending space and time, your words powerful yet asinine ๐Ÿ˜› it feels like a contradiction. And that’s the whole point. Life is a contradiction, we are all powerful yet not at all. We are ashes and we are form. I think that you have a start and you need to dive deeper into what you are trying to convay. ๐Ÿ™‚

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